Humanity Paragraph
Being humans means being imperfect. Nobody in the world is perfect, humans make mistakes. It is impossible to explain how humans are not perfect. We are socials creatures and productive beings, we create society to make this place a better living. An example of being social is communication, getting to know people better, spending more time with them and such on. Humans are very active in some ways, such as, playing sports, going out and having a great time with friends. The beauty of humanity to me, is intelligence. Everyone is smart in their own different way. Education is what makes humans connect well with others. The strongest thing on the earth is love, all humans should be treated with respect. There should not be any crimes, tortoure in this world. Good people deserve to be treated in the same way they treat others. Life is hard for some people, such as me, I work hard to get the things I want, but I never regret the things I work for. I am personally thankful for the things that people do for me. It is incredible on how happy you can be just because of one person, even though I do make mistakes. Humanity can be harsh but people should be thankful for things they have and people who admires them. Nobday is perfect, and I mean nobody.
Hi Wendy, You have a very powerful message in your paragraph. Now you just have to learn how to formalize it in a paragraph structure. Start with your opening statement that introduces all of your points in your paragraph which are imperfect, social, active, intelligence and love. Your concluding sentence repeats the points.
Being humans means being imperfect. Nobody in the world is perfect, humans make mistakes. It is impossible to explain how humans are not perfect. We are socials creatures and productive beings, we create society to make this place a better living. An example of being social is communication, getting to know people better, spending more time with them and such on. Humans are very active in some ways, such as, playing sports, going out and having a great time with friends. The beauty of humanity to me, is intelligence. Everyone is smart in their own different way. Education is what makes humans connect well with others. The strongest thing on the earth is love, all humans should be treated with respect. There should not be any crimes, tortoure in this world. Good people deserve to be treated in the same way they treat others. Life is hard for some people, such as me, I work hard to get the things I want, but I never regret the things I work for. I am personally thankful for the things that people do for me. It is incredible on how happy you can be just because of one person, even though I do make mistakes. Humanity can be harsh but people should be thankful for things they have and people who admires them. Nobday is perfect, and I mean nobody.
Hi Wendy,
You have a very powerful message in your paragraph. Now you just have to learn how to formalize it in a paragraph structure. Start with your opening statement that introduces all of your points in your paragraph which are imperfect, social, active, intelligence and love. Your concluding sentence repeats the points.
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Ms D'Angelo